Hi everyone (especially the @ALLIES) group.
In the past month and a half, I’ve completed ‘a draft’ of the book (hence the new title too).
At the moment I’m rewriting the intro section to be snappier, less data-heavy, and clearer about what is the book is about/who it’s for.
I’d love to get some quick feedback on it if any of you have time. Correct typos if you like, but be mindful we’ll have an editor for this and huge sections will probably be rewritten before it goes live:
The key questions I want to know are:
- Does it all make sense/are the points logical? (0/5) <- marks out of 5
- Is it engaging to read? (0/5)
- Does it clearly highlight who the book is for and what the book is about (0/5?
Any overall impressions / means of improving the intro would be greatly appreciated too.